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Post by pikapower23 on Apr 27, 2011 18:38:41 GMT -5
Hello. I am Britain. I despise France! >D
I preform magic to curse my enemies. I can also cook, but everyone says that my food sucks. Wonder why. I raised America when he was little. But then he rebelled against me! I like to read and drink my tea.
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Post by Alfred F. Jones on Apr 27, 2011 19:29:04 GMT -5
On behalf of Lili and I, we would like to remind you to re-check the site rules and the character application guide. If you need a visual guide to help with the instructions, there is other bios completed in the accepted section, or the personal example one here. If you weren't finished, my apologies, but you are free to try again. |
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Post by pikapower23 on Apr 28, 2011 17:36:45 GMT -5
^.^;
* Sucks at doing this*
B-but I'll try my best! What are the things I need to fix?
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Post by Alfred F. Jones on Apr 28, 2011 17:54:55 GMT -5
All bios should be done in three posts - everything else is generally fine, except, each section did have a set word count it had to reach. So really, dividing and adding. It's alright, we just thought we should remind you instead of leaving you wondering. |
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Post by pikapower23 on Apr 28, 2011 18:44:39 GMT -5
Three posts? Okay~
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Post by pikapower23 on Apr 28, 2011 18:46:40 GMT -5
Name: Arther
Represents: England
Appearance: I have spiky blond hair with emerald eyes. My eyebrows consistence(?) of five lines. I wear my army green army uniform with my black boots. I'll sometimes get into my blue fancy suit for the world meetings. I always have my game face on. I get hurt easily so I get cuts and bruises on my head or heads. Some say I look my best in my pirate uniforms, but I rarely wear them now. I rarely smile. My face sometimes shows pity, but I try not to. Erm, My skin is white and I'm always covered in flour, since I cook.
Personality: I love to cook, but people say it's bad. I like to drink tea as I read my book(( I'll edit later.))
Booth Time: He had raised Alfred when he was very small. He still is at war with France.
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Post by pikapower23 on Apr 28, 2011 18:47:49 GMT -5
Roleplay
" Where are you," asked Arther.
He was looking for Flying Mint Bunny. Flying Mint Bunny said he wanted to play hide and seek. Arther sighed. He rather drink his tea than look for Flying Mint Bunny.
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Post by Lili Aloys on Apr 29, 2011 13:42:53 GMT -5
On behalf of Alfred and I, we would both like it if you please re-did your app to fit the requirements of the bio. Firstly, the appearance and personality section needs to be 100 words each, and the section under 'Booth Time' is not a history section, but is rather what their booth looks like at the world fair. The roleplay post is also under the requirement, as you need 300 words for it to be complete. There is also some grammatical and spelling errors. Please fix these and we will take your app under consideration. It's okay, but we need to see if you have a good grip on the characterization as well as the ability to meet the requirements.
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Post by pikapower23 on Apr 29, 2011 15:38:40 GMT -5
^.^;
Erm....Alright, but I always hated to write 100 words. I'll try my best.
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